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Connie surveys the scene she has set up with satisfaction. Her slave’s legs are spread, his ankles chained to bolts imbedded in the floor. His manacled wrists hold his arms up and out from his torso. His body is totally nude. She watches a droplet of sweat trickle down the taut muscles of his back and disappear between the soft white cheeks of his buttocks.
Connie smells herself starting to sweat. She had known that the aroma would make her even more horny so she has worn a black cotton/polyester shirt to trap her odor. Black leather panties are capturing other scents among strands of her curly red hair. Her right hand caresses her left breast and pinches the nipple just below the point of pain.
In her left hand she has a full-sized riding crop. The heel of the handle is a large golden globe. The handle itself is covered with spirals of rubies and diamonds. She slaps the end of the whip into the palm of her right hand, then puts its shaft between her legs, drawing it slowly forward and up. A shiver runs up her spine. She transfers the crop into her right hand.
The soft tinkle of chains returns her attention to her prisoner. “You may answer yes or no only. Do you understand?”
She smiles. “If you cry out, I will stop.” She slaps the crop lightly across his buttocks. “Do you want me to stop?”
“No, mistress.” His voice is subservient, soft.
She raises her arm and brings the shaft of the crop down hard across his ass. He makes no sound but his muscles, his glorious muscles, tighten against the restraints.
“Do you want a gag?”
“Now be quiet. If you make any more than a whimper, I will stop.”
She tucks the crop into the side of her panties and moves next to him. Her fingers trace the outlines of his muscles, especially the separations between the sinews in his arms. She drops to her knees behind his right thigh and hugs his leg as hard as she can. Rising to her feet, she puts her left hand between his legs and squeezes his balls. She smiles at his tremble. Her right arm moves around him, her hand grasping his erect phallus which she strokes. She continues stroking for several moments until he moans.
Stepping back, she withdraws the crop and rains blow upon blow onto his back, legs and buttocks until they turn red. No blood is drawn. He makes no sound. She bends and kisses a red mark on his right buttock. When she feels him relax, she pinches the spot she has kissed until it turns even redder and she feels his muscles tighten. She steps back and targets the spot with a stinging swat. He stifles a half-yelp.
Connie throws her long red hair back and laughs. Her right hand reaches around his torso and begins to stroke his hardness up and down. Fast then slow then fast until hot slippery liquid dribbles over her fingers.
Alisha Banks: You have me hooked! I immediately upon finishing the first book had to start the second. It is a captivating story and I can't wait to finish the other two book! I will definitely be recommending this book to others to read!
Cassie Jacobson: So many twists and turns. Keeps you wanting to read to see what happens next. The main character is detailed well. The struggles and growth of Joby makes you admire her. It gives you a proud satisfied feeling while reading it. A refreshing difference then most books out there today, and in a w...
Hawkebat: Playing both Kotor I & II and Swtor I found the story line interesting and it held me until chapter 35 Very good story and plot flow until then, very few technical errors. I felt that the main character was a bit under and over powered, as it fought for balance. The last few chapters felt too f...
Elise Faith: I found this story sensual, captivating and honest. I enjoyed the use of crude language, it made me able to relate to the character more. The idea, however unoriginal was well executed and the story is delivered clean and crisp as the characters themselves are.
MegaRogueLegend666: I love this story so much. It's impossible to describe my excitement with each new chapter in words. The author has such a good writing style, very good descriptions of the fighting and character descriptions/emotions. the plot is also amazing! This fanfic could be a side anime show or novel ......
Erin Crowley: The concept here is really strong, but the execution is definitely lacking. Tenses, grammar, etc are all off, with at least one or more errors per 'Page' on my phone. The writing style is almost broken- sentences move into each other awkwardly, and are filled with an excess of "filler words", lik...
Giuliana Cassetta: My face is full of tears, I never cried like now with a book or even a movie. I loved every single chapter. I truly don't know what to say, I'm out of words and my eyes hurt from crying. Such an bittersweet story, it's so wonderful. One of my favorites for sure. Keep it up!
Tiffany Thomson: This story is not something I would normally pick up and read but I'm so glad I did, I wasn't able to put it down and my husband was yelling at me at 3am to put it down and go to bed (just waited for him to doze back off before picking it back up) I really hope Natalie brings out another book eit...
Sara Grover: Being that this is your first story and I assume first draft, a lot of little mistakes are common, we all have made them; little things like your instead of you're, missed capitalization, missing punctuation, etc. As for the plot, I have a lot of questions and I did leave comments on certain sect...
genlynne2379: I read the other review of this book and I must say that I disagree with it wholeheartedly. I do not believe the author put the apostrophes in the names just to be unique, but because the characters are supposedly of a different race than humans. They are Anmah. They should have different names a...
Dru83: This is the second or third time I've read this one and I just love it. It has just about everything you could ever want packed into one scifi story. It still has some parts that are a little rough in terms of grammar, punctuation, and word usage, but it's still an awesome story. I love how detai...
aaron10905: This is undoubtedly one of the best books written on here. I actually unistalled this app until someone told me about this story. I came back not expecting much, just to be drawn into the story and the characters. I would buy this book in real life, as long as another was promised shortly after.