Love the concept.
Definitely looking forward to this being finished. Great story so far, other than needing quite a bit of work with spelling, and a bit of work with grammar here and there. Otherwise, this is a really good read that grabs and keeps my attention, and I personally love the Native American feel that the shapeshifters give.Read the story now
Good, but needs some work.
Definitely a great concept, but does need some work. Some things need to be thought out more, some things could use more detail, and all of it could use some work on the grammar, punctuation, and the general way the sentences are laid out. Even just in the first chapter, I had found myself having to re-read some lines because the wording didn't make a lot of sense. Overall, though, it is pretty good. I do hope to see it receive some touch ups to make it even better!Read the story now
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