Daniel

Riverside

Got born - Grew Up - Went Bad - Got Busted - Reformed - Grew Old - Went Bad Again - Glory!!!

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Great Story

"The Cycler Gangs of Beta Fornax" is very well done. I like how the author handles the "lingo" of the day so far off into the future. As the plot unfolded I was drawn in anticipation of what would happen next. There is definitely plenty of action and suspense. The descriptions of the many different scenes in a world so vastly different than our own were vivid and real. I enjoyed this very much and would recommend it to other perspective readers.

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Very Enticing

This story "A Half Orphan" Encompasses the clash between the modern world and old traditions and values superbly. The effects upon multiple characters who are all caught in apparently hopeless and soul wrenching delimas by trying to do the right thing from their prospective and culture engulfs the reader with anticipation as to how it will all end. The reader comes to understand and care about each one and the problems they face. The main character is especially endearing and special. Great plot and great story. A very nice job of portraying a different culture and immersing the reader into that world. I enjoyed this very much. I must agree that it needs some editing and occasionally the flow is interrupted by the grammatical and structural errors. Nice job!

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Enticed

At the start I didn't think it was going to be very good. How wrong I was. As I read it pulled me in and enticed me into reading the rest. Very imaginative and mysterious. I like it.

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Eye Opener

Cyber Match is a real eye opener to those who are not savvy to the real dangers out there in the Cyber Dating world. I think it should be "required reading" for those before they enter those sites. It is a very well written and interesting read. The dialog is handled very well. This could have been quite a challenge since there is so much going on. Good Job!

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Well Done - Liked It

Seriously I don't think I can compete with the elaborate reviews already posted. I can say that this story is captivating and full of potential for a movie and possibly lead to a couple more. Animal rights people and environmentalists should especially like this one. It is in a sense a "clean up dodge" theme in a much more interesting setting with a fascinating hero and characters. The readers get that satisfied sense of relief they crave when the bad guys are taken out by Rufus. Overall good reading, good plot and execution. Good Job.

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