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Pure enjoyment

Pure enjoyment!! This story is kind of futuristic, but it also reminds me a lot of the old-time classics. I was enchanted by it and taken in from the very beginning. The idea about the genetic cleansing is really well thought out and that idea is actually what grasped my interest and what made me read on. As the story progresses, it gets kind of saddening but happy at the same time. This is because you have a great way of writing, which makes the readers feel sad for the characters but also hope that better things are on the way. Layla’s character is very well depicted and despite her job in the beginning of the story, you made it hard not to love her. This is a true feature of a great author – making people question their beliefs, judgments and prejudices and trying to stop them from overgeneralizing things. You did a great job here. I loved the ending and Layla’s unusual, but yet so explainable and reasonable, attachment to the boat. Overall, I am pretty amazed!

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Thrilling

This is a true horror/fantasy story. It starts of as a completely ordinary story, but quickly turns into something far from ordinary. The story is very thrilling. My heart beat fast while reading some scenes. I was worried, but also curious to see what happens next. Each Chapter is full of suspense. You have a style of writing that really takes you in from the very beginning and makes you eager to hear more, to read more. I really love how you write. The ending was expectantly unexpected. It shows that there is more of this to come, leaves the reader at awe. Personally, I was left with a feeling that the story is to be continued and I would love for that to be made true. However, I suggest further editing.

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Enjoyed it!

This is a thrilling story with a very complex topic. The topic is actually something we should all think about. Even though this story has fantastic elements, the seriousness of the topic makes it all believable and makes the reader wonder about certain issues and it does raise some intriguing questions. The whole story is mysterious, dynamic, fast-evolving. Every sentence is worth reading and some send really strong messages. I would recommend everyone to read this. I also love your style of writing, so I must commend it. The story about the Second Korean War really gets one thinking. Climate change is really an intriguing topic. Overall, a nice, active, lively, a bit dangerous story with an absorbing and thrilling topic, represented by a serious author who has a great style of writing.

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Nice!

This story was short but powerful. It is modern, probably aimed at younger readers. The mysterious, secretive style from the very beginning made me only more and more interested into the story. I could really see the reasons for Mark's fear, disrupt and paranoia. I could not imagine myself in the same place. Mark had so many theories and I believed every one of them. The style of writing is nice and the story is consuming and easy to read. However, I believe that having dialogues would add to the dynamics of the story. I would also suggest further editing and proofreading. The story seems kind of unfinished, though. Overall, I have enjoyed it and would love to read more.

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Thrilling

The story is very mysterious from the beginning. I loved how you portrayed your characters so well, especially Miss Lamb. It is clear from the very beginning that she is a lot different than the other women at the time and that she is a powerful, self-minded character who will give you a hard time but who will stay etched in your mind. She leaves such a strong impression which is very difficult to erase. The plot is exciting, thrilling and gripping. I believe this story would make a great movie. The topic is not new, but it is explored in a completely new manner, which is what makes the story valuable. This was a great read and I enjoyed it immensely.

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Amazing

This is a dark story, just the way I like it. The topic is beyond interesting. The whole concept of the tiers of demon in hell, together with the two sides of Hope (a sin and a virtue), is very well thought out and full of astonishing details which amazed me more and more every time. My eyes were wide open and I was on pins and needles while reading this. And just when I start thinking that things are about to untangle and unravel, it just gets more and more complicated. I was in disbelief when I learned about the deal of Leander’s parents and when I became aware what Leander is actually capable of. The whole story is just amazing and I simply could not stop reading it, I read it in one breath. And the suspense never left and never disappeared, not even after reading the last chapter. You really left me speechless and in anticipation of more chapters. However, if there are no more, then the ending is even more amazing. Great job!

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Wonderful

In the beginning, the story seemed as an ordinary teenage story with outcasts and the popular ones, with a nerd and a mean girl. However, it turned out to be something much, much different and I ended up enjoying it immensely. The beginning itself is powerful, gripping and grasping, hinting at the fact that the story was not going to be ordinary. The whole story is wonderfully written, it made me sympathize with and feel for Angelica and Jeremy, as well as Jeremy’s mother. It is so easy to read, but yet so deep. I believe that this story could not have ended in any other way. I was said to see Angelica go, to see how her own sacrifice, her good deed, came with a price. And a price which she herself paid. However, her gift may be a sign of freedom and she may have finally got that freedom in the end. Wonderful story.

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Nice

The story is very dynamic and I like how the chapters end in cliffhangers. The names of the characters are very unusual and odd, which makes it better, in my opinion, showing from the beginning that this was not going to be an ordinary story. Lilleth’s struggle to find Llamech is amazing and the whole story is full of interesting and fun elements. I got a feeling that the story is not over yet. If that is the case, I’d love to read more. Overall, I have really enjoyed reading this and I have to give you compliments for your captivating style of writing.

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Wow

Wow. This is a very dynamic, gripping story. It was thrilling and exciting from the very first sentence. I was enchanted from the start. The title is powerful itself and the story lived up to the expectations I had after reading the title. I love the fact that the story is full of details and that it is unexpected. The plot is intriguing and absorbing. It was a pretty long novel, but every single sentence was interesting and just kept me engaged and captivated. The ending was pretty romantic and emotional. Overall, the story was lively, forceful, vigorous and at the same time very soothing, nice and calming. I really enjoyed reading this and I can say that I was amazed.

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Unusual

This is a pretty unusual story and it was also pretty interesting. It is not only a romance story. On the contrary, it is mysterious from the very beginning and it has a lot of unusual and unpredictable elements. For example, I was pretty surprised when I learned who Chloe actually was. It reminds me a bit of a series called “Dead like me” and I think that this could also be a great movie or a TV series. I loved the unpredictability of the story and I love how the ordinary, every-day elements were intertwined with the supernatural elements. I also loved the ending; it would be a bit odd if Jude hadn’t lived. I enjoyed reading this story.

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Enchanting

This is a story with a seemingly ordinary topic (a seemingly ordinary romance story), but it turns out to be everything but ordinary. I think that almost everyone can relate to Leila from the very beginning. The way you write and describe makes the reader feel as if he/she were living the story, rather than merely reading it. The story about how they met was kind of contemporary, but also very traditional and chivalrous and I liked that very much. The whole story was intense and emotional and I felt for the characters while reading it. I was excited to see what will happen next and how things will turn out for them and I was happy to see that it wasn’t simply a romance story. The prophecy stuff really added to the story. I loved the ending. Just so you know, happy endings never go out of fashion.

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Amazing

I really enjoyed reading this story. The beginning is strong and compelling and I liked the fact that the author involves the author from the very beginning. The quote about art in the beginning reminds me of Wilde’s “The Picture of Dorian Grey” and it was a great move to put it in the beginning, because it somehow made me read on. As I got further into the story, it got more and more interesting. The descriptions are very nice. The whole story is kind of dark, mysterious and mystic, for example the scene when Remy describes how his whole life was a “big slow suicide”. The ending is also very strong and it leaves a kind of an impression which is not so easily erased from the mind. You have a great style of writing which draws the reader into the story and makes him/her feel a part of it.

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Captivating

First of all, I have to say that I am amazed with the poems in the prologue and the epilogue of the story. They are both so beautiful that I read them many, many times, until realizing that I have learned them both by heart. The whole story is very deep and very warm, so to speak. I was taken in from the start. You have a great style of writing, which I highly admire and must compliment. The story is both sad and happy and due to the great way in which you write, I was able to feel everything that the characters themselves felt, from great sadness to great happiness. This is a captivating story and I am amazed by it. Forever bound. Perfect!

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Pure enjoyment

This is a nice, romantic story about a love between two childhood friends who meet after 20 years. It is also a story about how life can get complicated just when you decide you would make it as simple as possible. Angela and Andrew seem to experience exactly that. But what is important is that they get through everything and eventually and up together, which is what they both wanted and deserved. The story is written in a nice and amusing way. It kept me interested throughout and made me curious about what is next to happen. The romantic detail with Andy giving her the “A+A” carved in a long time ago was a bit too much for me (although it seems childish) and that was the moment which almost made me cry. This is a very enjoyable and amusing story and I believe it would be a great movie.

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Amazing

Although this is a sci-fi story, I believe that everyone can relate to it. And by this I mean that everyone can relate to the feelings present throughout this story. Everyone has gone through some struggles, felt enormous pressure or guilt. Ferdinan’s struggles, the pressure exerted on him and the quilt that consumes him, since he is responsible for the death of many people, is something which made me personally (and I suppose any reader would feel this way) sympathetic and also worried about him. This is a story with a strong message and can be very instructive. I also love your style of writing and the ending you wrote is very powerful. These last words in the last Chapter still echo through my mind and they are the reason I cannot stop thinking about this story and thinking about what must have been going through Ferdinan’s head. I really love this story!

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Enjoyable

I usually do not read or like these kinds of stories. However, this one was pretty enjoyable and easy to read. The very fact that I did not stop reading after the first Chapter, even though this is not my cup of tea, speaks for itself. And I really did not regret that decision. The story started off as a simple teenage drama, but turned out to be much more complex than that. I like how you write. I love how the story flows and how it absorbed me, kept me reading, kept me interested in the characters’ destinies. I was really fond of Peter when he was introduced into the story. It seems unfinished though, and I’d love to read the sequel, if there is going to be one.

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Thrilling

This is an exciting story, full of suspense. It is really amusing, yet the topic is „dead“ serious. I love how dynamic it is. The idea of the afterlife and the job of the people who have died is not new, but it was portrayed very nice here and I love your idea. It reminds me a bit of a TV series I once watched, called „Dead Like Me“. I don't know if you were inspired by this, or not, but it instantly crossed my mind when I read the very first Chapter. I love the language you use, it makes the story enjoyable and easy to read. I believe this would be a great movie, full of entertainment. I have enjoyed this story very much. I also love the title.

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The title says it all!

This is a consuming story. It takes you to a completely different world and makes you believe every word the author wrote. No matter how unbelievable and unrealistic the situation, your style of writing simply makes it all real. The story completely absorbed me. The Chapter „The Devil's Kiss“ was particularly interesting to me. I was surprised with how it ended, because I was completely taken in by the whole story and never once questioned its truthfulness. I loved this moment and I loved the feelings that this story invoked. I will not reveal anything more by writing it in a comment. However, I must say that I felt really sorry for Tavish in the end. The whole story amazed me. It can be seen that you have thought it out very well and have not missed a detail. I love it.

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Love it!

This story is very exciting and dynamic and I also love the touch of mystery in it. I like the prologue very much. The interview with the psychiatrist and the Father really does what a Prologue should do in the first place – it incites readers to read more. It instantly made me interested in the story. Their feisty conversation certainly made an impact. I always love it when Chapters have titles and these titles of yours are particularly great – they give you a hint, an insight, but without actually revealing anything. I am also fond of the gambling insinuations in the titles and the names. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and I read it in one breath. However, I would suggest further editing and proofreading. I suppose you have made some mistakes on purpose in the dialogues, in order to portray character in a better way and I appreciate that. But, I would suggest that you check at least the narrative parts of the story for mistakes. It would improve your story and show your seriousness about being a professional author.

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Futuristic

This futuristic story left me in awe. It is thrilling, exciting, but that is not its best trait. The most amazing thing about this story is that it is deep; it makes you wonder about certain things and raises some questions. I was amazed with this “madman” as you called him in your summary and with his astonishing but dangerous invention. However, the story gets more complicated Chapter through Chapter and there are a lot more things to worry about than I could have imagined. Your style of writing is great, sophisticated, but smooth, easy to read and sort of addictive. I was also surprised, but in a good way, with your choice of words in some situations and I really must commend your perfect language. This is what makes this story even more serious and which makes you stand out as an author. I also love how the story left me puzzled and ended in a cliffhanger. It simply made me want to read more. A great story!

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Enjoyed it immensely

This story is beautifully written, the language is great and it absorbed me, took me to the place and time of the story. Once I began reading this, I could not stop and although it is a very long story, it is well worth reading. It becomes more and more intense, dynamic and exciting with each Chapter. The characters are superbly portrayed. From the very beginning, Karissa's feeling were transferred on me, I felt her sorrow when Orion left, when Piaget died. But, it becomes even more enthralling when the focus shifts to Araina. The scene of her floating is still etched into my mind and I can still feel the danger, fear and anxiety I felt while worrying for her and hoping for her rescue. This shows that your writing is great and that you have the power of making your readers truly connect and care for the characters, as if they were their friends, or even family. As I have already mentioned, this is a story worth reading and I believe that the sequel will be even better, provided that you plan on writing it, which I hope you do.

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Expect the unexpected

This story is mysterious from the very beginning, from the point I, as a reader, met Amanda and got familiar with her strange relationship with Mark, a relationship she herself did not know why it still existed. There was something that kept her close to Mark, even though he was abusive and she had another man, Jason. Given this relationship, when Amanda died, the first person that crossed my mind was Mark. It was really ease to believe at once that he was guilty. However, experience with mysteries has taught me that the most suspicious person is usually never guilty. ;) That is why I made both him and everyone else my suspects while reading, just like the people who were investigating this case. This is a great feature of you as an author, since I was completely taken in by the story. And you did a great job in making all the characters have their own motives for this murder, Stacey, Rita, even Jason. This is what makes the story thrilling and interesting up until the very ending. And I expected it to have an unexpected ending, which it did. The clues that the murderer left were amazingly thought out. It would be not so wise of me to reveal the ending of your story this way, so I will only say one more thing. I guess the devil really is in the detail.

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Charming

Reading this story was a pretty nice experience. The descriptions are very vivid from the beginning, i.e. from the description of Alicia and David’s love. It was very emotional and I loved the fact that there were to different perspectives. The way they reconnected was very interesting and I was happy to see their love emerge once again and the two of them ending up together. The technical part of the story is perfect and your style of writing is also amazing. It is captivating and absorbs the reader. Overall, the whole story is very gripping, appealing and enthralling. I enjoyed reading it and I would give my strong recommendations for it.

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Thrilling

This is a mysterious and puzzling story of a young girl going through a lot to find out many things that were unknown to her during her life and her journey starts because of and after her grandmother’s death. It is very exciting and thrilling and I could not keep my eyes away once I started reading it. Zoe found the answers to some of the questions that she had and found out maybe even some things she was not questioning, but she also did not find out everything and I get the feeling that this story is not finished yet. However, if this is the ending, it is a great one, since it left me in suspense and made me think about the story for a long while after finishing it. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and I would highly recommend it.

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Nice and emotional

This is a very intriguing and emotional story, a kind of saddening from the beginning. It is captivating and enchanting, once you start reading, I can assure you that you cannot stop. This is all due to your style of writing, which is simply amazing and which makes the reader live the story you write. You made it really easy to condemn Irene and to feel for Adam. Your descriptions are also amazing and I was really taken into this story from the very beginning. The technical part of the story is also good. Overall, this is a great, demonstrative, absorbing, enthralling story worth reading. My compliments and strong recommendations!

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Perfect

Reading this story felt like living it. It was intense from the very beginning and I love how there were different perspectives before the stories of all the characters actually became connected and became one story. The story was very emotional throughout and there were times I felt like crying. Selling the Walnut Cottage was unexpected and felt wrong at the time, since everything that happened between him and Lucy and since Lucy always wanted that cottage for herself. But, looking back from the end, this was actually the right move. Lucy got her cottage in the end, when she expected it the least and she got many more beautiful things with it. I really enjoyed this story, from the beginning to the end.

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Great!

This story left me speechless. It was so full of many different, complicated, intriguing and hard-to-grasp situations. When I first started reading, I thought I was never going to comprehend all the intertwined relationships between the characters, I even thought I was never going to remember all the characters, not even their names, let alone their stories. But I was so captivated by the story that I could not stop reading it. The plot is so very unexpected, intriguing, absorbing and intense. The whole story is dynamic and I felt a kind of excitement while reading it. I was very happy for Shane and Jessie, and I could never have predicted that Shane was actually Todd’s son. The story is very mysterious and secretive when it comes to these relationships between characters, but there are a lot of details which could hint at something, if you pay enough attention. I was shocked when I learned who Sam actually was. I really enjoyed this story.

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