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Okay

This story got off to a promising start. It was like a cheesy porno and I kind of liked it, but things went downhill from there. The characters are all complete psychos, the story is chaotic and the 'Sugar Baby' thing is irritating. At times it is difficult to decipher who is saying/thinking what as there are POV changes and scene changes with no clear end to the previous scene. I think with a thorough edit and a little more character development this could be a good erotic story. The concept is good and there is definitely potential.

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Worth a read

After a strong start with the first story, the series has gotten progressively weaker for me. I'm referring to the story development rather than the level of kink. There are a few common cliché themes where there's some kind of drama that makes them realise their feelings. Also, each story as a different POV yet the language and expressions are common throughout. Would everyone use the expressions 'crooked his/her finger' and 'bottomed out'? It does make the stories less believable and I think the stories would be stronger if they were each told in a different tone. They are still a good read and I've read them all in 24 hours so I have enjoyed them.

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Good

This was a bit of light relief after the first book, aside from the random rape and beating, which also features in the first book actually. Anyway, it was much less scary. However, I didn't find the characters as well developed in this one. Andrew features in this book but seems unrecognisable as the Andrew from the first book.

I could not get into Angel's mindset at all. I really could not understand why she wanted this relationship in the first place when she was so frightened and her last was so abusive. I don't think her feelings and desires were explored enough in this respect. It was a good read, though, and I look forward to the next.

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Fuck!

I've been eyeing this story for a while but I was a little scared about what 'extremely graphic' might mean. I told myself, 'how bad can it be?' and I found that out in the first chapter. It was a little/a lot too hardcore for my vanilla essence and I almost abandoned it there, but a disturbed fascination had me continue. I didn't get off on this story and I'm glad about that, I would be worried if I did, but I can't say I didn't like it. I loved the author's writing style. It was gripping, mesmerising and downright terrifying. I don't know if I've ever read a book that made my heart pound so much. I hated Andrew at the beginning and willed his former partner to get revenge on him, but I kind of liked the fuck up at the end even though he might have put me off being tied up again. Overall, a seriously fucking disturbing but thrilling read.

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Loved it!

I was so excited to find there was a sequel as I really enjoyed the first book. This one was different to the first and was more like a novel rather than short stories like the first book, but it seemed to work. There was also less sex in this one but I didn't mind too much as I really loved the story. I'm sad it's over. I hope you're going to write more!

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Hot hot hot!

I really enjoyed this story and there were moments that definitely made me blush. I really loved how it wasn't just erotica and all the stories were connected somehow, that was a really nice twist and I loved spotting a new connection. I really hope there's going to be a sequel as it does end like there's more you need to know about the characters. Please write a sequel!

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